Talk:Ang Lalake sa Larawan/@comment-33037984-20170914041327

This novel was very poorly written and barely makes any sense at all in terms of the romance (there was none at all). Characterization is all over the place (goodluck trying to understand Don Rafael and Gabriel) and there were so many filler scenes that the novel can do without (every Margarita scene). The constant lapsing to Spanish (gah!) was of poor taste and did not add anything to the story or to the characterization. The name dropping (mentions of Fortalejo forebears, we can barely keep up) was all over the place and adding previously known characters in accidental appearances (everyone was here but not in the funeral scene but just all over) for no apparent purpose wasted pages that could have been put to better use.

This definitely is the worst book out of all in Kristine Series.